{"id":153,"date":"2012-09-17T16:14:08","date_gmt":"2012-09-17T22:14:08","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/?p=153"},"modified":"2012-09-17T16:17:27","modified_gmt":"2012-09-17T22:17:27","slug":"paid-one-on-one-critique","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/2012\/09\/17\/paid-one-on-one-critique\/","title":{"rendered":"Paid One-on-One Critique"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Painful, but extremely beneficial experience, where a writer pays to an agent or other experienced professional in the publishing business, to critique his manuscript.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/ID-10031110.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-154\" title=\"critique\" src=\"http:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/ID-10031110-300x199.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"199\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/ID-10031110-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.adrigomes.com\/literaryexchange\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/ID-10031110.jpg 400w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Here in the United States when you attend a writers&#8217; conference, you can usually chose to have part of an ongoing project critiqued for a reasonable price, after all, those who opt for this service aren\u2019t necessarily published, and can\u2019t pay ostentatious prices. To many of us the cost of attending a conference itself can already break the bank.<\/p>\n<p>I passed through this sieve, and survived, actually I believe I came out stronger. It was hard to hear about my shortcomings: this manuscript is <em>too<\/em> long for a YA novel, this chapter is <em>too<\/em> complex, and\/or <em>too<\/em> mature; young readers prefer to have only one POV over the course of a story. Didn&#8217;t you know the children&#8217;s picture book market is saturated with speaking animals? Careful not to antagonize potential readers with stereotypes that are <em>too<\/em> explicit; this character seems <em>too<\/em> confused about his emotions, and so on. On critiques of the three different projects that I&#8217;m developing I&#8217;ve heard it all, and I clearly have a big problem with the word <em>too<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>I certainly don\u2019t agree with absolutely everything I\u2019ve heard, but the critiques made me see I still have a lot of work ahead of me, and I&#8217;m revising my manuscripts respecting certain market demands. Many will say that \u201cmarketing\u201d should not shape art. I reflected a lot about it and I believe that if I want my readers to hear my message, I must speak their language. My most visceral writings can be kept hidden. Besides, I don\u2019t even know if what I write can be called art anyway, I only know it makes me happy.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Painful, but extremely beneficial experience, where a writer pays to an agent or other experienced professional in the publishing business, to critique his manuscript. 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